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This is a design I created for the Obey/Metro Park t-shirt contest. It's a picture of mother nature who is crying because of the destruction/pollution we're causing to our environment. You can check out the contest at:
[link] Let me know what you guys think. Comments and critiques are always welcomed. |
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April 13, 2008
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I wish it was time for Cheers, but it's not. It's time for vengeance!
Maybe you are the next Hoffman, Mahatma, or Chomsky, But no one will never know
I didn't know it's mother earth until you told me, which means you should probably have some leaves or plant life flowing out of her hair. I don't think she needs to be crying, wearing a gas mask is pretty self-explanitory that you can't breath and that's there's something life threatening going on.
Another bit, there's not enough pollution or buildings/factories, you put the focus on the flowing hair and her eye. I kind of notice a refinery in the background. You need to have her flanked by smoke chimneys and powerlines. maybe change the composition from an oval to a vertical rectangle with towers above her head. the rectangle will give you more room to play with the power and affect of your composition
I'm being critical, cause i know you have skills and this piece looks good, but it's not great yet.
good luck with the contest and remember it's advertising, so be blunt with your symbols, beat us over the head, but be smart about it.
take care
tony
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